Rikki-tikki-tavi 2: Rising Tides by ChomperHugger (critique requested)

Rikki-tikki-tavi 2: Rising Tides (critique requested)

ChomperHugger

14 November 2017 at 18:34:57 MST

Sequel to Rikki-tikki-tavi. Rikki comes across a new enemy named Nagasta. She plans to kill the people in the garden. Rikki once more has to save the garden from a new enemy. He tries to figure out what her motives are and why she wants to kill the people. What he finds will change everything! This sinister enemy is his worst nightmare. Can he save the garden this time?

(Note, I wrote this a few years ago and know it needs work but was hoping for some suggestions, hence why I flagged it for critique.)

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