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Ninjutsu zukai serpent by chiltikcoatl (critique requested)

Ninjutsu zukai serpent (critique requested)

chiltikcoatl

Well, I think I outdid myself this time with this one :P
I'm well achieving a level of realism and a good technique con my work, as well as making better backgrounds...as well as I did this in like 10 hours :P

As you can see this is my character on his third mode (the others being melee and ranged... this one is the "thief" type) wearing no armor at all but light soundless clothes and a fashionable gas mask, as well as tabi boots, escencially a "cyber ninja".
In this mode he relies the least on his flight and has to run and do other kind of maneuvers, and is much more capable of killing and ending a combat in matter of seconds.
As well in this mode he primarilly uses a laser dagger, but he does count with other weapons such as an energy ninjato (both the sword and the dagger are capable of cutting to a molecular level of course), throwable knives, in general it's unsuited to stand strong for too long... which makes it better for him to switch back from thief to either melee or ranged mode.

Art by chiltikcoatl chiltikcoatl

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    Overall it's really good. Any picture that incorporates a character and a background is okay in my book. Lots of furry artists just draw the character and stop there. Overall it really works. And the wings look nice! (I hate drawing wings myself XD). The only criticism I have is that some of the buildings in the background look a little too round, so I think the perspective might be slightly off. But I'm just splitting hairs at this point. Overall this is really an awesome picture and you should be proud of it! =)

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      I guess you're right regarding the perspective one, I guess that's what happens when I do it with no ruler nor anything... through I long to be able to do that by pulse alone X3

      Thank you very much nwn

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    Looks nice. The belly button kind of looks lopsided.

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      If anything, it's because his body is not completelly straight, not that while he's facing towards the viewer his torso is slightly turned, also he's bent forward, so his abs don't look like abs at all when in that position, as a bit of skin and little what remained of abdominal fat give that look (most artists either put the character ln a straight posture, completelly awkward but abs look fine and neat... But no, even slender guys have some folds when in certain positions)

      And thank you X3