21 January 2014 at 18:25:20 MST
on 23 January 2014 at 10:44:15 MST
Amazing eyes! Very interesting light lines of the tail. Seems like the focus on the eyes. But too rought hatching on the back and above the back. A little distracting of the main focus. And the last comment about the left paw. It's seems to me there is some unnatural flexure of fingers more than 90 degrees left. Fast but full of mood picture!
on 27 January 2014 at 22:27:58 MST
oh... I flag for critic accidentaly hehe (dont event know the option) thanks anyway~
on 28 January 2014 at 00:02:33 MST
on 23 January 2014 at 20:23:40 MST
I actually like the hatching; it makes the theme more dramatic. I think it was a smart idea to add colored bits to this. It makes them pop out more. It might have not had been a smart idea to add color to the tail, mostly because the tail appears unfinished (not that it's a bad thing to look that way), but adding color to it doesn't compliment the rough look to the tail. Overall, though, I think it looks moody in a good way. Good job.
on 23 January 2014 at 20:24:22 MST
One more thing, practicing more on anatomy is always a good thing.
on 27 January 2014 at 22:28:05 MST
on 28 January 2014 at 06:42:43 MST
Oh.. :P okay.