Chibi commission for beartamerallen ON Facebook of their character K.O
he was super fun to draw, sorry for the wait and I hope you like it :heart:
character (c) beartamerallen
art (c) Carlie-NuclearZombie
I see you're requesting critique for this, so I'll comment on things I think will help you out!
This guy's pelvis is completely out of line with his torso/ribcage, his right leg doesn't look too bad but his left leg looks broken or dislocated
http://gyazo.com/02b3765a6df7cd9599fccae16c7564e6 - and - http://gyazo.com/2cba0d5075a23144283c3f19e5feb391
I fixed his 'skeleton' then drew a really rough sketch over it with some muscles and I also made the head a bit bigger. His head wasn't big enough for the style, I think, so it just made him look like a child instead. I also gestured towards shifting the angle of his face a bit so it would be much more natural relative to the angle of his torso & neck!
I hope this helps you out. >w<
thank you for the Critique, yes one of my main weaknesses in drawing is anatomy sadly, I have always struggled with it and always try to get better, I am very happy you did the time to fix the skeleton in this picture this actually may help me quite a bit so thanks for that C:
as for light source that's also still a W.I.P to improve I have defiantly gotten better from a year ago, but thanks for the tips
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Darth Grethon
Beautiful improvement