The Island of Ruin - Page 14 by calculusmaster (critique requested)

The Island of Ruin - Page 14 (critique requested)

calculusmaster

18 February 2014 at 16:25:06 MST

THE ISLAND OF RUIN
CHAPTER 1: BRAVE NEW WORLD
Page 14

A/N: To avoid confusion, the page numbering is carried over from the previous chapter. Also, color!