The Island of Ruin - Page 9 by calculusmaster (critique requested)

The Island of Ruin - Page 9 (critique requested)

calculusmaster

18 February 2014 at 16:03:38 MST

THE ISLAND OF RUIN
PROLOGUE
Page 9

A/N: messed around with some shading again and ink brush width, please, tell me if it made a difference.