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Kaye body sketch by tsunderdog (critique requested)

Kaye body sketch (critique requested)

tsunderdog

Since I'm so bad at inking Iv'e decided to ignore it completely and just do a series of refinement sketches.

Working on an outfit reference - this is just the body/base. Not sure how the final lines will end up looking.

I need to do some actual harcore study of feet and hands.

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    Dat sweet face <3

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      Don't be fooled! It's a trap.

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    Breasts are still a bit high up, but you're doing a lot better at anatomy.

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      Thanks for the crit. I've already redrawn them to be a bit smaller and less ballooned, but I didn't adjust their height yet. Now that you've pointed that out i've checked how far mine are from my ribs and either I've drawn her ribs too far down or I need to move her breasts further down. So that's something I'll work on before posting the next version.

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        Cool, also before I forget. What a qt face. :3

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          Faces are my strong point, because if I don't like how they look I just scrap the piece and start again. Thus, they get drawn more than anything else I do! Unfortunately, I have a lot of other weak spots I must work on very soon. Feet and hands elude me even after all this time. I've stagnated recently and I have to grow past it.

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            Ahh, you can try doing study sketches on hands/feet to help with that.

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              I might do that this weekend. I need to find a bunch of photos first, I'm sure there's some cache online I can use for quick sketches and whatnot.

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      Hmmm, higher than most, but I've seen lot of nude images of ladies with boobs that high.

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        I think what happens is that because I draw from the head down with very little proportion/pose sketching ahead of time, I end up with proportions I like for the top that look squashed when the whole sketch is seen. Even so, she's based on my proportions, and I've got a very barrel-chested physique, which means everything about me looks like I'm a little squashed out of proportion. judging from where I drew the ribs they are indeed a little high up, and moving them down has made the body look more even.

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          I've only seen one full body pic of you and you were covered enough to comply with Shariah Law, so I have no advice XD

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            Pff, I've lost weight since that photo anyway, it's just getting better with proportion vs style :P

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    Great... JUST GREAT! now I have to draw her again :C

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      I'M NOT STOPPING YOU :D

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        FIIIINE.... >:C

        I also like her body type. Dat tummy <3

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    Anything with feet and hardcore in the same sentence is okay with me.

    No but seriously this looks good <3 I like the pose, and the way the chub turned out. People mess that up a lot but this one looks good. :D