MoonBeam Comic Take One by Art_By_Nicolette (critique requested)

MoonBeam Comic Take One (critique requested)

Art_By_Nicolette

12 June 2018 at 15:09:07 MDT

Another comic I am working on. This one is starring my secondary fursona, Dylan MoonBeam. Again, this is just one frame, of one panel.

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    Looks fine. The line on the right side of the mouth looks out of place. The character looks good. A full body pose should help it look nicer. I like the patterns on the ears.

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      Thanks. I was trying to make it look like a smirk, but I guess I should have connected the lines lol. Thank you again. I appreciate the advice and support

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        Try removing the line on the cheek and modifying the line with the frown, instead of connecting. It should look much nicer than making the oddity bigger. Drawing more characters in the same pose should help give you a better understanding of what helps.

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          Thank you for the advice! I definitely will keep practicing