12 June 2018 at 15:09:07 MDT
Another comic I am working on. This one is starring my secondary fursona, Dylan MoonBeam. Again, this is just one frame, of one panel.
on 12 June 2018 at 20:09:00 MDT
Looks fine. The line on the right side of the mouth looks out of place. The character looks good. A full body pose should help it look nicer. I like the patterns on the ears.
on 13 June 2018 at 09:34:22 MDT
Thanks. I was trying to make it look like a smirk, but I guess I should have connected the lines lol. Thank you again. I appreciate the advice and support
on 13 June 2018 at 18:17:34 MDT
Try removing the line on the cheek and modifying the line with the frown, instead of connecting. It should look much nicer than making the oddity bigger. Drawing more characters in the same pose should help give you a better understanding of what helps.
on 13 June 2018 at 18:20:19 MDT
Thank you for the advice! I definitely will keep practicing