27 February 2014 at 16:45:01 MST
on 27 February 2014 at 18:26:47 MST
Personally I think you need some kind of bass / arp in the back ground.
Lesson to this and I think you'll know what I mean.http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/387732
Slug-salt has his own charms style, but I think you got potential of making your own kick ass beat.