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Working on a Finbar picture after re-reading Julia Marillier's Sevenwaters Trilogy for the fourth or fifth time now.
Critiques appreciated
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Thank-you. If you have the time for a redline that would be much appreciated :) Humans, and especially faces, are not a strong point of mine :P
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LOL, glad you took my comments as I intended. I will try and do a redraw and show you sometime today,. Like anything else, doing people takes practice :) Keep working on it and I am sure it will get better and easier. :)
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Thanks! I see what you mean about the face now. I'll work with the wing some more. It is meant to be a swan wing, which does not have quite as long primaries but I like the sweep of it you made.
My own anatomy is off (I have scoliosis) so human anatomy in general has always been a struggle.. faces just need to practice more :P I really appreciate the time you took for the critique and outline :)-
Always happy to help if I can, hope you are happy with what you come up with in the end.
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TristanAlexander
The head is to flat/square, heads should start as egg shapes, the eyes are in the center of the head NOT higher than the center line. The But should be more rounded. The wing would be better if you continue the flight/long feathers down towards the hip. If you would like I can do a redraw to maybe help and show what I mean.