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I Must Break You by Antumbra (critique requested)

I Must Break You (critique requested)

Antumbra

Another step to getting my comic running, this time with a redesign of: https://www.weasyl.com/submission/494488/you-have-the-psg1

Her name is Emma. I wanted to have her with a thicker fit body to fit her personality, but I'm not sure if I did it enough, but I can adjust that later.

Comments and critiques are much appreciated!!

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    Her right arm's top halfi a bit too small compared to the other, muscles don't grow that much when showcased. I really need to learn some English names of the body parts lol

    This is really naiss !

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      GAH! I completely forgot to add her bicep on that arm! Thank you!

      Our of curiosity, is English not your first language?

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        :)
        I'm an Estonian, English is my second language

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          Nice! You definitely do English better than I do, and it is my primary language lol.

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      Adjusted and thank you so much!