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If you love me, won't you let me know? by Ankhoors (critique requested)

If you love me, won't you let me know? (critique requested)

Ankhoors

It was a long and dark December

From the rooftops I remember

There was snow, white snow

Clearly I remember

From the windows they were watching

While we froze down below

When the future's architectured

By a carnival of idiots on show

You'd better lie low

If you love me, won't you let me know?

Was a long and dark December

When the banks became cathedrals

And the fog became God

Priests clutched onto bibles

Hollowed out to fit their rifles

And a cross held aloft

Bury me in armor

When I'm dead and hit the ground

A love back home, it unfolds

And if you love me, won't you let me know?

I don't want to be a soldier

Who the captain of some sinking ship

Would stow, far below.

So if you love me, why'd you let me go?

I took my love down to violet hill

There we sat in snow

All that time she was silent still

Said if you love me, won't you let me know?

If you love me, won't you let me know?

"Violet Hill"- Coldplay

Another in my "Coldplay" series.

Just drew this on a whim. I worked really hard on it...it's far from perfect..but oh well..

Suggestions for improvement/redlining would be nice. But please be nice about it... :)

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