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Untitled (Working Title) - Prologue by Aniro (critique requested)

Untitled (Working Title) - Prologue (critique requested)

Aniro

So here is a prologue to a potential story idea. Keep in mind that this is something that I just put together in a few hours and I thought it was decent.

This may not be the final revision of this story, but I don't know yet. Either way, I'm feeling good for how it turned out. Feel free to critique it however you please and leave comments. Thanks!

-aniro

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