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Sunste by angrychill (critique requested)

Sunste (critique requested)

angrychill

Horrible spelling mistake, worth it.

Iiiii did a larger and more demanding project this time- or rather, experiment- in SAI and it was SO worth it!
Gonna upload speedpaint later, so watch out.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19213197/

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    okay, since you requested critique im gonna be that one weird person who actually will criticize ;3

    im no specialist, so feel free to question my opinions

    first off, the background area in the bottom left corner - i suppose it's meant to be far below the character? if yes, then i think it should be duller, more gray-ish, because of air humidity and other nerdy aspects. also, it will not blend in with the foreground that way.
    Second, the tree looks odd - possibly because the cliff implies it would be above the character, and the perspective you used suggests its on the same height. Or that the tree leans towards the viewer.
    You could also try and make blades of grass in the foreground overlap the paws, otherwise the grass looks flat.

    not gonna be picking at the wolf lady, because im terrible at anatomy and stuff, and you draw much better characters than me anyway.
    cheers:>

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      Thank you so much for the critique! Haha, nothing odd about that, as I actually quite appreciate it.

      Yeeeeesh, I know the background is, like, very dull, but my patience was wearing so thin because of the wolf, so I decided to wing it... I never did backgrounds before too, so it's a first.

      Thank you for the info! My eye gets used to a picture so it's faulty when looking for mistakes.

      As for your art- I think it's fabulous! The figures look neat and alive, along with the environment they're in. Keep it up! :)

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        wow, thanks!
        a protip for overlooking mistakes - if you mirror a picture left-right, it's as if you're seeing it for the first time (no idea why, but it works)