This has a good color palate, the blues and whites go well with the pink of skin. However, there are some proportionality problems with this one. You might want to read a guide (such as http://www.idrawdigital.com/2009/01/drawing-tutorial-anatomy-and-proportion-1/ ) in human body proportions. That would help you bring it all together. Your lettering is quite nice in style and execution, an excellent hand for roman lettering.
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This has a good color palate, the blues and whites go well with the pink of skin. However, there are some proportionality problems with this one. You might want to read a guide (such as http://www.idrawdigital.com/2009/01/drawing-tutorial-anatomy-and-proportion-1/ ) in human body proportions. That would help you bring it all together. Your lettering is quite nice in style and execution, an excellent hand for roman lettering.