"Double, double toil and trouble..." by Ainoko-Ironrose (critique requested)

"Double, double toil and trouble..." (critique requested)


15 December 2014 at 19:16:39 MST

"...Fire burn and caldron bubble.
Fillet of a fenny snake,
In the caldron boil and bake;
Eye of newt and toe of frog,
Wool of bat and tongue of dog,
Adder's fork and blind-worm's sting,
Lizard's leg and howlet's wing,
For a charm of powerful trouble,
Like a hell-broth boil and bubble.

Double, double toil and trouble;
Fire burn and caldron bubble.
Cool it with a baboon's blood,
Then the charm is firm and good."

In a journal posted recently that was titled [url=https://www.furaffinity.net/journal/6330052/]They are coming!!!![/url]. I hinted at the coming imps May color=yellow[/color] and Hem color=yellow[/color] Toraburo, and here they are.

I have a feeling that these two are going to give some of my other imps a run for their money, but that is a tail for another day...

May and Hem Toraburo

May Toraburo (on the right)

Age: 300 (75 Earth years)
Height: 4'8
Weight: 168lbs
Bust: AA cup
Gender: Female
Sexual Orientation: Asexual

Likes: Hem, pranks, working at the Sashay's Twilight, dancing, fine dining, walks with her brother, stargazing, swimming

Dislikes: Sex, annoying and rude people, drunks, smokers, overly spicy foods.

May is the oldest by 10 minutes and is very protective of her brother despite his ability to fend for himself. Her protectiveness of Hem started from the day they were born. She works at the Sashay's Twilight pleasure house as one of the sex employees despite her great dislike of sex. Because of her dislike, she is one of the customer favorites as they like the challenge of finding ways to make her enjoy the sex. May's coloration is a few shades lighter than her brother's, and when speaking she is soft spoken.

Despite her overall dislike for sex, May will only consent to bedding with her brother, usually taking him from behind and pegging him long and hard. She loves using her brother after he has been used all day by their clients before pulling him close and going to sleep.

Hem Toraburo (on the left)

Age: 300 (75 Earth years)
Height: 4'8
Weight: 168lbs
Cock: 7"
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual, leaning heavily towards males.

Likes: May, pranks, working at the Sashay's Twilight, dancing, fine dining, walks with his sister, stargazing, swimming

Dislikes: Annoying and rude people, drunks, smokers, overly spicy foods.

Hem is 10 minutes younger than his sister May, loves dressing up as a female every chance he gets. Hem works at the Sashay's Twilight Pleasure house as part of the housekeeping staff.

Hem is a neuter, as when he became an adult, he went and had his balls removed due to him being sterile and in order to retain his girlish figure. When he had his balls removed, he had the doctor tuck his empty sac into his body as a rudimentary vagina. Ironically where his sister hates sex except when it comes to him, Hem is your typical nymphomaniac. Hem thrives on sex, to him sex is food for the body and soul and must be partaken as often as possible. He can be usually found getting used by the more prolifent clients.

His coloration is darker than his sister's and when speaking he sounds almost like May, except with a huskier voice.


May and Hem were hired to work at the Sashay's Twilight due to their impish nature. The owner discovered them when they were performing in the market, switching places without their audience knowing. It was later that their new employer learned about their mischievous nature and told them what their jobs were at the pleasure house. The two protested greatly as they felt that they were getting put into positions that didn't work to their particular strengths until the owner told them that more often than not they were going to switch places before the clients found out. When they found out what game they were playing the twins quickly agreed to the roles that their new employer wanted them in.

Even though the twins are adults, they prefer to dress up in clothing meant for the youngsters. Far more often than not they will dress and look like prepubescent teens or adults.



You can find the original art done by :iconMilkcrown: by going and clicking on the following link here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/15188039/

Marked General for the description of May and Hem Toraburo

Please go and give :iconmilkcrown: your love, pageviews, watches, love, faces, comments, loves, shouts and commissions. When you do, tell him that :iconainoko: sent you his way.

Art (C) :iconmilkcrown:
May and Hem Toraburo (C) :iconAinoko:



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    I like em both o3o;

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    I -adore- them! Lovely characters.
    Also try using <> instead of [] for the text coding, and see if it makes a difference.