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Aegis of Iridescence- Chapter I- Odd One Out by AeroboltShadowVulpine
So... it's been three years to this date since I posted the first chapter of my first book on FA. Right here. http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11187661/
At age 16, this thing is... very garbage. So much so that I cancelled sequels I had planned and all sorts of garbage. Blegh. So I decided it was time to revisit this old friend of mine and rewrite it under a second draft. I won't give up on this one so easily.
So under a new name. And all sorts of crap. I welcome you to Aegis of Iridescence. The second draft of course...
Let us see if I have truly grown as a writer over these years...
Chapter One of Draft One had 1,453 words
Chapter One of Draft Two (this one) has 2,517 words.
A 73.22% increase. Nice.
Let's go...
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Something along those lines. But there is going to be just a little more than that. I'm not THAT generic, even at 16.
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...I still get the feeling something like THIS may be about to happen in the next chapter. XD
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...Either that or he was once a mighty hero but lost his memory somehow like Jason Bourne. XD
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...I get the feeling Aero is some sort of "prophesied chosen one". XD