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The curse and the talk. by 2382 (critique requested)

The curse and the talk.

"I have a curse priest" "and that curse is?"
"Well the curse is that I have to be vore or fade I will out of existence!" "That's terrible glad you came here"
"On top of that I won't age and one of the things to break it I heard is to literally get eaten by everyone."
"For one thing isn't vore not possible?" "If someone tries to eat to me they gain the ability to do that on top of it.
I most likely have to experience every type of vore. I won't die but I'll feel everything depending on how the person perceives it.
and the type of vore might change how I feel and how much I feel during it." "that is sad for that to happen to you but do know who did?"
No not at all "well maybe you made a pray mad and thay than made this curse to get at you.
Or someone just like your taste too much and made that to keep you.
But we must proceed that's why you came here get that removed."
He tries for two hours as it's has no effect. "I'm starting to fade calm down "I'll find someone" she simply says "you must do the deed!"
"What are you talking about that's probably not a good idea?." "I don't want to fade!
I want to live! we are alone in this church! I am the last confession!
I am somewhat sorry." "I'll make sure to give you the"...??? "I'll make sure you won't even notice you're doing it!"
"I already made myself more tasty." "I can mimic my Predators favorite food to the point they don't realize the difference between me and their food!"
"That's only good from this curse," "I doubt that would be the case." "Do I smell rabbits rabbits are so delicious!!!"
As he opens the door out of the confession box. Seeing his delicious treat "well rabbit any last words!!"
"No I have be eaten by nearly everything so I hope I'm nice and good."
"Oh you'll be a delicious treat! Licking chops you're so small I could stuff you down my entire Maw better conserve energy!!!"

Lightly Chuckles "is this a first date just get it over with." As growling is heard "if you're so stupid then fine" forcefully shoves half of her down.
failing on his belly "this is big bigger than I thought but you will be mine rabbit!!"
As she fake's trying to struggle aggressively shoves with his hands the cat down she realizes what the is Predator it is weasel.
"How funny trying to act all Noble but is the descendant of a con man." As the last bit of light reachs her head slowly.
Sliping down falling into more Darkness with a gurgling of the stomach the hunger of this new weasel seems to end.
"such a feeling meal" burps loudly "I think I'm going to need" as he passes out from the pain and the realization of what he's done.
As she wakes up "still a calico I thought with my luck. I might be something else" as the weasel second wake "what why'd you do that.
"Shhhhhhhhhh! it's our secret" "why should I I'll be breaking." "Do you want me to do it again? Or should I show you more tricks up my sleeve"
"I guess you're right but." "I need more people to vore me for me to exist. Or have someone constantly eat me.
"I could tell there's people you listening come have a nice kitty treat.
I'll be whatever you want ,whatever taste and whenever you want me I do all orders of vore"
"Why are you randomly" "SHHHH they can hear you. Plus what you don't have the extra strength from eating me"
"What do you mean" every time someone eats me. I slight increase their skills after all it is a family curse." "what the?"
As she left but leaving a note "I mean everyone" I'll come back to you if I need a quick num num" "What the I hope she's fine."
Over to her "hello person what do you need" "well I'm sure I can provide."

The curse and the talk. (critique requested)

2382

short but sweet feel free to critique rewrite remix draw fanart make your own OC, custom story,
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