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A day in the life of Joey the bank teller WG story day 3 by 2382 (critique requested)

A day in the life of Joey the bank teller WG story day 3

Well I "feel better now Day In Day Out.
Today's a new day Rebecca,Veronica which one's better why am I even thinking Rebecca.
I'll just go for Veronica she touch my heart first. But I better go to the fridge go's to see only one slice a ham.
I need to get more ham I guess have to make a sandwich.
grabs the slice of ham go's to the bread box to get some bread.
Get's some tomatoes and some lettuce puts it all together hopefully this will is satisfying my day hunger.
I have a long day of work to do being a bank teller it isn't always easy but it's not impossible. Better go get my suit" as he puts on his suit.
"I'll have to wait a minute or two for my friend I guess this will give me time to reflect
I need improve oh my attitude a whole lot I have a lot of extra work. Today possibly visit Veronica to.
And try to forget about the past just take a deep breath in and take a deep breath out.
Perhaps think about introductions. Maybe I should build up some strength there is a local gym it does stuff for free
paid by the government for civilian use for a healthier you that was what their ad said. Wouldn't hurt to lift a little bit of weight".
"perhaps I should be going outside he's probably waiting in his Taxi goes outside.
"how are you good pal" "well elk" "seems like you're in a good mood" a bank teller must always be in a good mood. "That's a bit much
well I better be driving you off be a good 2 minutes."
okay on the way Joey sees an sign back during the collapse "all bankers must pay all banks must pay we lost everything."
as he's hyperventilating as the elk pulled over.

"Is everything okay" "yeah just a memory of the past" "okay but don't do this too much. Keep that up we'll have to take you to doctor.
Well maybe we should get some food you could be a little late right."
No but you're not going to say no are you" "You're right on that let's just get some fast food to eat."
as he drives up and orders there burgers one chocolate shake and a large soda.
"that will" be $10:50 gives cash "look I think we can split this between us right."

"Joey nods "okay then joey you will have two burgers and the chocolate shake."
As Joey munches on the hamburgers filling his gut with Juicy meat "that was pretty filling I guess.
I better down this chocolate shake as he quickly downs it feeling slightly bloated feels "like I ate for a week."
"Well someone packing on the pounds" "what" "I think you're getting jiggly" "I doubt that."
"You have put on some blubber" "I don't think it's that much really you're kidding me."
"Well but in all seriousness we should get you back to your job." "yeah you're right this is just a friendly meal."
"Ha Ha Ha your so funny not but let's get going" "yeah you're right as they drive to the bank.
As he says bye to his pal. As he goes inside "one more day in this nice establishment hopefully it would be fun today".
It's good to see Angela's here she was always such a curvy silver fox. Spending most of her free time baking.
But I better get to my desk as Angela goes to his desk "hi Joey I just figured you'd want some donuts" "What flavor are they?"
"Jelly and homemade" "oh my I guess I can't say no then to such a pretty face like yours." Ha Ha ha you're funny at times Joey.
As he's eat's the jelly filled Donuts as some squirts out Jelly on his tux as he cleans it off with a napkin.
"Those are some pretty good Donuts" feeling pretty bloated better not eat too much more.
I am feeling a little sluggish from all the food but at least it's good food
I think someone's coming up to the desk "hello I'd like to make a deposit."
Joey writes up the deposit slip "thank you for that I wish you could do the same during the collapse."
As Joey looks scared then it's gone as he takes a deep breath in and out
"Everything will be OK just need to take this day easy". As multiple Bank transactions go in and out some good some bad.
As Joey's on his break he decides to go to snack machine. A little bit slow slightly heaving from all the food and work he's done.
As he puts into machine $2 for his favorite snack the peanut bar. As it looks like it's about to to dispense as it stops Midway.
As Joey yells "why!" As he lightly shakes the machine as it falls. "yes I can have my peanut bar".
As he uses his claws to open the bar immediately stuffs his face with it remembering it's gooey sugary Pleasant taste Lightly burps.

"You always cheer me up my old pal peanut Paul but I think our time needs to be cut short" carefully throws the rapper in the trash.
"Getting a little bit slower but at least my desk isn't that far carefully sits down."
As the boss comes by as we see a pretty massive male skunk saying "well? well? Do you have the reports done Joey?"
"Yes I have them done I was wondering if I could retake a driver's test." "Okay but only if is short otherwise I might have to well cut the fat in the sense."
"I understand I'll make sure only do this once and succeed." "that's better by the way today's potluck and you're nearly done with your shift.
You help 25 clients you help clients take out 5 loans and you've done 25 papers I hope you can stay for the potluck."
"I don't see any wrong with that" "okay Joey" as he is in the back room "go help yourself" joey nods can't be that much food you know "I'm pretty full.
I feel tight in my clothing." As he walks to the potluck a smorgasbord of different foods awaits him as his he grabs a small bowl of chili slurping it up.
A little bit of bread and a small piece of cake. "I've had enough I feel pretty full it hurts slightly
but I figured at least to eat some that way other people know their food's good. Burps loudly whoops I better go to the gym can't be that bad."
"I should come here more often even if I try to put on weight.
I still need some muscle to be useful did at least there's a coach here. I'll just try the five pound weight just to see how much I can lift.
I really let myself go that bad after the collapse. Why I used to be able to lift 20 I need to at least get back to that.
This is excruciating my arm already hurts it's only been ten minutes. I guess I have to stop at least there's some water".
But as there's a turtle semi old a pretty Buffy turtle as it sees him as it yells "you have some nerve to be in here".
"Why do I!" "Coming from someone who invaded their motherland it's not my fault!" "It was fun seeing a lot of Fire a lot of people become homeless."
"All Because Of You bankers loan out money you don't have!" "I just did my job" "that's it I'll make you pay I will."
As he is cut off by the coach saying "no fighting I will call the police guards please take him out." "As he is carry out but screaming you will pay!"
But as Joey sees the person but as as it's a muscular female cheetah. Sporting a six pack and very strong arms slightly bulging with muscle.
"sorry about that my name is Abigail. I just had to do something I thought something would have happened if I didn't."
"thanks "I don't know what I could of done without you." As she Chuckles "probably fall on your butt your chubby butt."
"Hey' "it's so funny seeing someone a little bit big workout here. At least It put a smile on my face today but don't worry the past is the past.
I'm also from the motherland I think it's more of a Improvement than a dissimprovement."
As he looks in shock "really" "I didn't have much friends back then now at least have a couple. And slightly better pay that's a plus."
But as elk rushes in "so are you okay Joey you okay" "yeah I'm fine" "that's good what happened" "just the past."
"You want to go home early" "no I think I'll stay here a teeny bit more alright.
"To make up for it that inconvenience what I will do Is give you chocolate protein shake to help you build those muscles".
As Joey thinks you mean put fat on my thighs I've already gotten bigger. "Here you go make sure use it in 24 hours it's only good for that long."
"Thank you" "will I see you tomorrow?" "Yah maybe" "that would be swell" "bye" "bye."
As Joey goes back to the car as Joey thinks no one pays to be a coach at this gym it's literally volunteer.
I hate to think it could she be homeless and simple using it as a cover-up.
It is open 24/7 she could easily put a bed in the back room sleep there and work on shifts.
"well home" "no can we drive by Veronica's shop." as they drive by as
"my you're always so friendly helping me at any moment. And you pack on quite a bit of weight 400 pounds.
Carrying two crates at a time you're always so friendly. Maybe I'll reward you why don't we go to a restaurant."
As he simply nods as they drive away.
As the Elks says "that is some serious competition you need to pack on some muscle mass" "I know that!"
"cool it!" "I can't believe he's gotten that far ahead!" "Well that's life!" "can we just get home!" "take a chill pill"
"I'm sorry it's just I could be losing Veronica!" "And being angry ain't going to help it."
"You're right" "maybe go to store and get her a gift tomorrow. And give it to her in person that will help a little bit."
"yeah that might help" "and offer to work on the weekend." "Thanks but I think we're at the stop" "oh yeah well.
"Bye" "bye" "well this is great I better not lose her I would do anything to keep her." Aggressively drinks the chocolate shake
"oh my stomach...too much food...feeling a little queasy I can stand this. I would do just about anything even make deals with demons.
But if it makes her happier I could let her go. But I will try not to I don't lose that easily. It's in my blood I'll just checked my weight."
As he checks it 207 pound yes "I'm getting somewhere. I need to keep going but I feel tired.
but Rebecca,Abigail why am I even thinking the others no it's only for Veronica I want no one else."
But as he plops on bed as it takes a couple hours of deep thought thinking of ever.
,interactions,life decisions,what to eat tomorrow,and so on. And just idea of losing Veronica but finally goes to sleep.
But it takes several hours and the sound of screaming Was Heard throughout the night.

to be continue?

A day in the life of Joey the bank teller WG story day 3 (critique requested)

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wow that was a doozy. But this is my third story. I hope you guys enjoy it I put a lot of dedication and love into this. But feel free to criticize it, feel free to remix it. If you do credit me. But do send me a link if you do I like to see what you changed.

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