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a day in the life of Joey the bank teller WG story part 2 by 2382 (critique requested)

a day in the life of Joey the bank teller WG story part 2

As Joey wakes up "today will be an interesting day. Why aren't I winning much with my sadness.
But I might as well have my food." Goes to the fridge to pick up his ham and eats 4 slices of it.
"Well I'll have to get more ham soon Veronica please be mine." later today I've got to make amends with that opossum.
It won't be the hardest thing to do. The hardest thing is to stay through with it.
"But I better not think of that." What I need to do is to get dressed.
It's bad enough I'm living my old parents house."The collapse why Dad why did you do that.
You didn't have to. Mom was crying all night." Why did you go to war. Why just why!!
"But at least I still have my old pal from high school. Still I lost my driver's license a long time ago. And they wouldn't let reinstated unless.
I go through the entire test again. So I've been hitching a ride off my pal till next paycheck.
That way I can get my boss to let me off hopefully to get back my driver's license. I hope he will." "At least I got today off from work".
I will watch TV for an hour after all it is 12 a.m. and At 3 P.M I will call My Pal to go out. 20 Minutes later "alway's full commercials."
"Why can't there be something good on television". "I'll never know how that finishes with all these commercials". "I once knew a person who made commercials."
"He did a lot better than these current ad's" As a knock on the door happens as he goes the door. "Hello who are you what do you want.I'm kinda busy right now."
As slight giggling is heard."You haven't changed much have you goofy." As Joey says Oh yeah yeah yeah yeah. Blushing very slightly seeing it's Veronica.
"Remember you want to watch a movie together for old-time sakes."yeah you're right that shouldn't take too long."
"Oh my always the time person." "dwaaa someone been putting on weight haven't they." Joey says "yeah sadly." you look so cute pinches Joey.
As Joey says please stop as she stops. "Your just so cute that i had to pinch you""why" "but isn't it the new action movie we're going to watch."
"Yeah yeah it should be in my drawer I'll go get it."
As Joey goes to the drawer to get the movie. thinking "I watch this already it was pretty bad. I hope she doesn't mind a bad movie"."Are you going to take forever Joey."
As he says "coming Veronica" as he starts to walk back. "I hope it's as good as the last one."I got the popcorn made with lots of butter.You haven't ate that much popcorn have you.
Since I haven't been visiting as much. "I also made some chicken since you're such a glutton for it." "Why Veronica are you torturing me my with favorite foods."
"Because it's not torture okay chuckling. In all seriousness "you used to be a lot more happy a few years ago."
"The past is the past Veronica." "Okay if that's how you want to be grouchy." "Why" "Let's just watch the movie. I'll probably feed you some."
"Yeah I probably need a little bit more I haven't ate anything today." "Oh you haven't I backed you a cake a chocolate cake." "Oh my Veronica always comes prepared." "chuckling
yes I do. But you do know I'm meeating this one one black fox. He seems nice hopefully we'll get to be better friends."
"How is he to you." "He's nice he help's out around the shop. And help me in a financial situation" "He also help my grandma when she was in the hospital to the car.
"Why didn't you ask me." "You seem too busy that day. " "Do you need any help now." "No" as Joey thinks for a moment how can I get his weight.
Or any other thing other than black fox on this guy. "I know i will ask to meet him one day." "Can I see him one day." "I guess so if you'd like he's little heavy."

All the while Joey thinking oh no how am I going to compete with that. "oh my it's 2 p.m. I think it's about time I leave" "I enjoyed the time with you Joey."
Joey nods "well bye" "bye." All the while thinking could that black fox be doing something. He might hurt my Veronika or maybe eat Veronika. No don't be silly he can't do that.
"Ow my tail I shut the door on my tail it hurts the prys the door open. Man it still hurts but at least it's not stuck in the door." Maybe I should go out for an hour.
Going outside as he's walking as someone tappeds him on his shoulder. "Going I lost my job because of you." "I had nothing to do with that sadly I'm sorry."As a another one comes by a badger female.
"I can barely feed my kids because of you!" crying "it's not my fault I'm sorry.I can't see the future I'm sorry about telling you put in a personal Bond."
"My brother had to go to war because of you" says a fox. screaming "just leave me alone!!" As someone pokes him on the shoulder saying "Pal you okay."
looks carefully seeing that it is the elk saying. "Yeah" it's 3 p.m. I think it's about time we get in the car right "yeah.""Yeah you decide the restaurant pal to go."
"That bad man I can't think when it was. you had so many people with torches toward your house. But luckily it's in the past let's try to move forward." "yah"
As its 4 p.m. once they find the place."This good" "yeah yeah yeah it's good." "Your nervous wreck" "what do you expect!" Calm down.
Hyperventilating"I'm probably not good enough I'm going to fail.""No you won't as long as you stay focused keep it in a General good mood."
"Why don't we get a cup of tea to cool you down." "Okay okay okay"As they get a cup of tea as at is 4:30 p.m. "Did it help"
"yes "See you're better" "But I know that." "But lay off this spunk some ok." "Fine"But as hIs pal drives to location to pick up the opossum.
"Well it should be an interesting day hopefully you have a good day." "Yeah one thing I must say are you sure I should do this and not just leave her at the
restaurant." "It's only polite" "okay okay." Asks the head desk "that waitress from before" "you mean Rebecca " "yeah" "she will be off in 5 minutes." Okay
While waiting carefully Combs his hair. Thinking right hopefully the restaurant good enough. I hope she can enjoy it. as Rebecca comes out
"well it's good to see you showed up almost thought you wouldn't of." "Why wouldn't I I am a banker. Don't Bankers always make their appointment."
"Hahaha funny one here." "And I thought I was a grouch." "Hahaha off work you wish you were." "But then again I do like a big eater and someone's been feeding you."
"It's none of your personal business." "It is my business if I invest in it.""Why the pun." "But where is your limo Mr. Banker."
"I thought it'd be best to go to restaurant using a favor of my friend. After all gas is geting pretty expensive" "oh so resourceful Mr. Banker."
"Or should I say Joey" "Right to the car before my head starts to hurt." "Oh I was just pulling your strings a little can't have a little Pun time."
"Right to the restaurant." "Okay but you owe me 20 next week for all the times I carpooled you." "Why of all times why now of all times do you join on the puning."
Felt right but ok to the restaurant. As they're at the restaurant as the "table number 5 sir and madam." as they're sit. "Your menus sir and madam."
"Thank you" "Thank you waiter."As he orders a steak. As she orders fish. "We'll be right on it." "well Banker where do you work." "In the middle of the city".
"where in the middle" "Does it really matter" "Don't be all grouchy what if I wanted to come visit." "And distract me from work."
"You really can't take a compliment can you." "What" "hahaha you're so funny because of how one-dimensional you are at times."
"I guess you're so dead set in work.""You don't get out that much." "Yeah that is true but what are you trying to get at."
"Just saying you need to lighten up more and get out more." "Oh foods here" "Steak for the sir and fish for the madam."
As they start to dig in. As the sound of silent screaming as heard. As Joey accidentally stubbed his foot from leaning forward really fast
to munch on the steak. Lightly gritting his teeth."Are you okay I know a little bit of Medical.
You have to learn that as a waitress or at least I've learned on that on the job". "I'm fine" as they begin to eat their food.
With the occasional Chit Chat being said. "Well as a waitress I've had to deal with some rude customers.But you have been the least rude and the most quickest to apologize.
I like that" "you're welcome". "I am sorry for what I said back there". "you almost finish all your steak and. you only busted three buttons"
"what. You've got to be kidding me I just got it tailor." "That was so filling of a meal I feel so bloated. And pain in my belly it is definitely stretched.
And sore although they could of put a little more juice in the steak.
If you know what I mean." "I understand they are a little dry on meat here. But I'm sure it'll get better."
"I hope it does.""Perhaps a soda to wash it all down." "I don't know if I can eat anymore and I feel so full maybe one soda."
As Joey drinks the soda as it's crisp and soothing and bloating his stomach up more. As the fourth button pops off as we can see his figure expand ever so slightly.
"I'm so full can I go home." "Yes sweetie it's nice having a date with you."
"What that was at a date wha wha whaa what." "I'll see you next time"

As Joey slightly blushies "ok" As he walks to the car gets In the car. "Full" "yah might pass out." "well than let's get you to your home." "Yah"
As he's driven home as he says "bye." "Bye"
"Well time to go to the scale time to weigh myself" as he gets on the scale as He weighs in at 197 pounds "not 200 but very close very close to wining Veronica heart" "3 more pounds is all I need. But Rebecca she's nice too".
Goes to the fridge grabs the ham slices off one piece eats. Filling so bloated and in pain quickly puts the ham back in and runs to the bed.
Holding his belly tightly that was a bad idea. Just need to sleep now "I I I feel feel really sleepy".

TO BE continued?

a day in the life of Joey the bank teller WG story part 2 (critique requested)

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