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Hope people are enjoying this comic so far. Just to clarify what I'm looking for in the way of critique - I need to know if it's making coherent sense. Do people or objects seem to appear or disappear suddenly, with no explanation? Do the scenes change too quickly, like everyone's suddenly teleported there? Obviously any other critique is also appreciated :)