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This is a poem I've been working on for a couple years. I'd write some of it, then put it down for a while before picking it up again. I've not gone through and edited it yet, though.
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Nice. Very nice. L=
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kishniev
Battle between the knight and dark lord should have more imagery. Perhaps in several verses. You should show how God helps the righteous, make Him little more than deus-ex-machina. (I know, that's a bad pun, ha.)