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The Hunter Becomes the Hunted by Alcho

The Hunter Becomes the Hunted

Alcho

Soon enough the creature looked to the sky, seeing the sun beginning it's decent to the horizon to end the day. He grinned menacingly, "Soon. Soon my company shall arrive. I must prepare." He returned to his dwelling and began his finishing touches on his preparations for the night ahead. "Silly hunter will regret this day. Silly hunter best be quiet, very quiet."
At the same time, the hunter had already begun his journey back into the woods - armed with his rifle, backpack full of gear, and his old flashlight. "If this beast is real and not some hoax, this shall be the hunt of a lifetime! I can see it now, the people gathered around to see the massive trophy gathered from this critter! Let's do this!" He continued on his trail long after the day expired, and darkness overcame the landscape. He finally arrived at the scene where he picked up the creature on video and began searching for any traces it may have left behind. Much to his surprise, there were paw prints of something much larger than any animal he knew leading right into the entrance of the abandoned hospital. "Too easy - this'll be done in no time!" He followed the tracks to the doors, and gently pushed them open, both doors creaking and squealing loudly as they allowed him entrance into the dilapidated structure. "This thing really couldn't have picked a darker place, god...", he grabbed his flashlight and started looking around, his rifle slung around his back at the ready. "What's this?", he whispered as his light glanced over a very sloppily written sign. At a closer inspection, the makeshift sign was fresh, and written in some odd sort of ink, "Odd... what on earth....?". The sign read "Silly hunter come get your prize like a man. You scared? That why you bring such a gun?" "A challenge of strength IN a hunt?! This day couldn't get any better! HA! I'll show this thing what's up! Man this is going to add to the story!" He let down his rifle and continued on into the darkness.

After he had searched for a few minutes he heard a clang down one of the hallways. Instantly shining the flashlight there, all that he saw was a giant cloud of dust and a mouse running away from a bottle it had knocked over. He then whipped around at the sound of nails scraping down the concrete walls toward him - but once again, all he saw was the dust swaying in the air. "Hunter", whispered a voice from deep within the confines of the building, "Hunted?".

"Damn you, show yourself!"
"Hunter, hunted, which are you?"
"I'll show you once I find you!"
"Commmmme..."
There was another clanging down a dark hallway with no windows - the hunter rushed down and tripped on a misplaced board. "Damn you! SHOW YOURSELF!"
"Clumsy Hunter. Come. I am not hiding."
The hunter continued on down the hallway until he could only see the dust in front of him - the room he was now in seemed to draw all light from the world - the small cone from his flashlight the only escape from the blackness. Shining the light around he realized that there was no exit from the room other than the way he was blocking. "I know you're in here - SHOW YOURSELF!" At that second a small rock struck the hunter in the hand - causing him to drop his light. "What the hell!? Are you so scared of me to have to play games like this to prolong your sad life!", yelled the hunter, clearly angered and unsettled by the unexpected attack. He picked up his flashlight and it flickered then went dead - leaving the hunter alone in the pitch blackness. "Come on... COME ON!", he yelled as he smacked the light with his paw, hoping that it would flick back on. "COME ON YOU, DAMNIT!"
He smacked the light with a mighty strike and the beam returned to life! At that second, the hunter's head got wet, as something dripped down from above him. He slowly turned the light upwards and was at a loss for words at the horror towering over him. "QUIET, HUNTED ONE! You are in MY WORLD NOW! I AM THE ONLY HUNTER!"
The intruder now realized the magnitude of his decision to come alone, without a weapon. As he looked up he shone the light to reveal the monster's giant, slimy, blue tongue dripping saliva on him, and surrounding it the rows of razor sharp teeth in a large toothy grin. The eyes of the creature were sunken in, and maniacal in a way in which he had never seen before. The creatures arms were extended on either side of him - there was no escape - at the end of each arm was a giant hand, complete with razor sharp claws. "Oh god! What ARE YOU!?"
"God is not here! I am the hunter of the dark! I am your doom!"
"NO!" The hunter took off in the dark down the hallway, running as fast as he could to try and escape the horror that he had just experienced.
"There is no resisting! There is no escape!" Called the creature as it took to the walls, running on all fours, then jumping off the wall in the direction of the prey in which it was chasing.
There was a short, high pitched scream, and then nothing - the night returned to the calm from a few minutes before around the structure.
"Quiet... good. Nobody more to bother now. Nice trophy this one is... will add you to collection..."

Art by alcho
Crazy belongs to alcho

This is a part of my character Crazy's ongoing story line - to read the rest of it, go in order as listed below!

Prequel : https://www.furaffinity.net/view/25047710/
Part 1 : http://www.furaffinity.net/view/24380050/
Part 2 : http://www.furaffinity.net/view/24558093/
Part 3 : http://www.furaffinity.net/view/24853151/
Part 4 : https://www.furaffinity.net/view/25504203/
Part 5 : https://www.furaffinity.net/view/26792014/
Part 6 : https://www.furaffinity.net/view/25921463/
Part 7 : https://www.furaffinity.net/view/29216350/
Part 8 : https://www.furaffinity.net/view/29231935/ <- You Are Here

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