Relaxing At the Park Redrawn by MissPizzaPie (critique requested)

Relaxing At the Park Redrawn

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Relaxing At the Park Redrawn (critique requested)

September 16, 2018 at 22:03:09 UTC

Original here https://www.weasyl.com/~captainpizzapie/submissions/1497340/relaxing-at-the-park

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Category:: Visual / Digital

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HannahCan on September 19, 2018 at 02:11:48 UTC

I can see a lot of improvement from your original. The figures look much more naturally posed. I think a blue/ blue grey sky would be more realistic since you've the light source facing towards them. The left hand corner could use a little more love to balance out the negative space. Maybe more trees/ foliage?

Keep up the good work!
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  MissPizzaPie on September 19, 2018 at 02:55:32 UTC
  
  Thank you, I appreciate your critique. I'll try to keep that advice in mind. ^_^