I really am determined to make a story between Lukan and Klaus work within my standards. Winter's Gallows lost all its cohesion and One Decision's Echoes is... actually damaging to my health to do believe it or not. So I MUST find the best way to tackle this thing....
So here is my latest attempt. The exposition is fantastic by my standards to be honest... Problem I face now, is that I am not 100% sure where I want to go with this... But at the very least.. The potential is here.
I am needing some artists to design a professional thumbnail for this series to make it look more appealing. If anything, I want Lukan and Klaus drawn into what I have now, but kind of in the background at all... kinda like what I TRIED to do with the Winter's Gallows and One Decision's Echoes thumbnails... That all failed :P
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This...was by far the BEST thing I've read from you. Not a SINGLE mistake or rough-patch to be found. Now if only I can find the time to read your stuff more often. XD