Reaction image I made. It's better with out context.
If you're wondering about the pillows, that's actually what I use as I don't have a desk. Not exactly good for my posture, but what ever. Critique wise, I'd like to know what you think of the poses.
I like the posing just fine. The only thing that seems off at all is the shoulders and the neck intersection. As you sit forward like that either your shoulders draw up and your neck draws in which would follow the curve of the back how it is right now or there's that lean-to from the low back which makes the back straighter but makes the neck and head loom.
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Pantherking
Good