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What would you like to see more of? by you

and what should i work more on and how can i improve on it?

I already know my art is shit when it comes to composition ,shading, poses, anatomy, oh god don't get me started on the line works.

I might do some gift art if thats ok with some of you guys?

What would you like to see more of?

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    I'd definitely love to see some study of anatomy, and think it would really give your work that extra solid foundation!

    Also, perspective is a thing, a hard thing, here is help for the hard thing: http://aquaticsblog.tumblr.com/search/perspective

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    phew so

    Ignoring my emotional garbage on my page and general incompetency with art, I do have an understanding of the foundations of drawing and an eye for haromy. I hope to provide something more substantial than "I LUV UR ART" and more useful than any direct critique on composition, shading, poses, anatomy, and oh god the line work. The short version of this reply is that you lack focus. You don't appear to "progressing" in a direction, although its abundantly obvious to everyone that you have clearly made progress, judging from this upload.

    As far as I can see, you just seem to upload aimless sketches, cacaphonies of color and shapes so loud I can almost hear the first week of band practice. The comparison is deliberate, because your work is frankly amateur. Your finished pieces, as best as I can [discern](https://www.weasyl.com/submission/894199/art-trade-blue-version], are typically messy and lack any sort of "clean up," rather just made then published. If not messy, then downright boring to behold, in constrast to your usually wild and expressive practice canvases. I think you would greatly benefit from going over your work and making them a little more clearer - clarity greatly adds to the overall structure of the picture.

    And generally, characters other than your fursona kind of don't matter? They have no context, and while you do upload something interesting and endearing every now and again, you don't seem to do anything with it. The ideas are often inspiried and compelling, and perhaps I'm shooting in the dark and you do plan to do something with the characters or ideas at some point. Stories, comics, studies, compositions, whatever that means to you. But you don't allow us privy on your thoughts or plans - you just sort of (in the nicest way possible) regurgitate your art and go on your merry way. I think you need to work towards something - decide on what exactly you want out of your art beyond "having fun" and start moving in the direction - figure out how you can get there, and what you will do when you do.

    I don't know what your art will look like in a year, but its my belief that if you don't change how your work, it might not look much different from what you have now. I'm cautious to suggest that you may have plateaued already, but as you've probably heard ten thousand times before, if you don't constantly challenge yourself, your art will stagnate.

    So thats my two(hundred)cents. I may have projected a little bit here or there (its definitely possible) but overall i think thats personally what i would like to see. direction. focus.

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      also if you would please read that comment to the sound of beethoven's moonlight sonata

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        I like this critique and i was wondering if you know any good tutorials that have helped you?
        I see you linked me a pic of my ocs interacting with ocs. I only make these short stories because i wanted to reach out to other people who might feel that way.I never thought of making a comic of my characters before, i guess it would be because of my grammar and the fact that i'm kind of illiterate.
        I know that people are probably tired of seeing the same thing on here but Weasyl is my sketchdump account. I dump everything here and upload certain pictures onto my FA. I'm pretty sure the pictures will vary based on your taste, but i only upload drawing on FA that i like.

        I could try to make new characters and have them interact again.

        btw, the music stopped at 2:30 for some reason?

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        Maybe you could show me some of your inspirational artists so i can get a good what i'm going for.
        Show me some good examples

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    More NSFW!

    Boobs and butts and stuff, or dicks, whatever

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    Both porn and the diatribe from above sound appealing.