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Feedback! by TristanAlexander
OK people, the whole reason I am on here is to get feedback, to have fresh eyes on my work. I can not see what I may be doing wrong or right, I only see what I am used to. I need feedback!! I think people have gotten lazy and don't bother to post comments anymore.
Feedback!
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Skill is not required to see, you can tell me what you think works or does not work in my pictures. I appreciate that you left a comment to this at least.
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You got it.
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your doing great work keep it up!
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LOL, well thanks!
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It may be design choice, but I think you make eyes just a smidgen too big. Your general anatomy is great though, and I love the way you draw hair. Back to anatomy again; there can occasionally be a line or two that don't make a lot of sense, but that's only rare, and completely excusable considering the amount of detail and effort you put into your art.
I think more poses and angles would be beneficial, and some extra body types - to stretch your skill beyond the normal things you do.
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Thanks! Others have said I do eyes a bit big, I don't see it myself most of the time, but as I consider eyes very important, I don't doubt I may do them slightly larger than realistic sometimes. As for anatomy, I have studied it all my life and while I get frustrated and feel I am off in places now and then, overall if I have a line or shape, it is because my reference has it and it is right even if it looks odd. I do put a lot of time and detail in my work, I obsess over getting things as right as possible (I am NEVER 100% happy with the outcome).
As for doing different body types, have you noticed all the women I have been doing? I used to almost never do females and now I am trying hard to master their body type. Males I know very well and have done muscular and thin and young and old. Women I am just starting to paint well enough to be somewhat happy with. Give me time, I am sure I will try different body types for them eventually! Thanks for all the thoughtful input! :)-
No problem! The eyes are fine then. It's your style. As long as it doesn't look massively unrealistic (which, you may be glad to know, it doesn't), it's all good. As for things that look odd even though it's right, I get that. I've seen some seemingly normal positions for hands and even whole bodies where it just looks..wrong in drawing, but it's exactly as it is depicted. I'm not usually 100% happy with stuff I do either. If only there was a way to transplant images in one's head to a computer screen. XD
I haven't noticed, no. :P I've been a lazy poo and I haven't followed up on people I've been watching (over 4000 submissions to look through). I looked through the most recent dozen images or so in your gallery and gathered input from that. Perhaps I should start looking through more things. X3
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Well wish i could help but your skill far exceeds mine ^^;