Yeah, it may be a re-edit of part of a series I wrote a couple years ago but it's still something. It may seem a little short but I wanted it that way for now. The second chapter will be posted sometime within the next coupe days when I re-edit that as well, and then I may feel compelled to actually continued where it left off.
I'm mainly doing this for my own sake as a bit of release so I can continue with other things I have to do but it would mean a lot if I could get a little critique from one or two peeps. Even if it is more of a hobby I'd like to see what could use a little more development in my writing or story-telling.
Please and Thank You!
Laterz!