So haven't really received any feedback on here at all about the fanfic, things that you all may like or may not like. If my paragraphs are to short or to long, I know my grammar is still shite but... Im trying to work on that, and I don't have a proofreader so yeah...

Please, Please, Please!!!! feel free to let me know what you guys think so far if you've been reading through each chapter, their is more coming still but... I'm not certain if anyone actually is enjoying the story so far.

Thanks,
Kiyo