This is a short speed painting I did for Aciel ( http://www.furaffinity.net/user/dark-lagoon-aciel/ ). Just another one my series of creating commission examples with friends! This one was only about 30 minutes. The shortest one of them all. That’s why it is so rough. It’s somewhere in between sketch and speed painting. d:
Here’s how I painted it: https://youtu.be/yTiEyeiTARM
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Daoni
I like the amount of details put into this. Try doing more with the mouth open and jaw moved to different areas. Making tongue visible should help, even if it's sitting in the mouth. The posing is nice.