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Wow that took long enough but-- finally a second passage! = u =;
Here's to hoping future ones don't take me as long holy shit
Any critique regarding grammar is wildly appreciated. Also, if at any point you feel a sentence or situation is unclear, feel free to point it out so I can give it a second look.
"Guilt" and its characters belong to me.
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EHEEHEE I'm glad you liked it! CB
More to come soon hopefully! ; u ;
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Teavian
Ahh you leave so much suspense at the end! I like this a lot. Also really wondering more about Roger and why everyone had been staring at him nervously so much. So many questions!