May 30, 2018 at 20:40:46 UTC
Character: ruyakim
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Daoni on May 31, 2018 at 22:25:24 UTC
The details in the foreground are good. Adding more to the body of the character and adding more detail to the background should help.
Soraime on June 1, 2018 at 11:45:25 UTC
It was meant to be a simple background o: add more what to the body of the character? It's just a headshot
Soraime on June 1, 2018 at 11:48:31 UTC
Or am I misreading something?
Daoni on June 1, 2018 at 22:17:07 UTC
A floating head with a background looks out of place. Adding neck and shoulders was meant by the comment.
![Maximilliam Headshot [Comm]](https://cdn.weasyl.com/~soraime/submissions/1640187/699418bce6ed1176445f068635adea801b66e0d2bbb8c08f0b2ae187b53f8ae9/soraime-maximilliam-headshot-comm.png)
![Jay Mawshot! [Comm]](https://cdn.weasyl.com/static/media/5a/39/cb/5a39cb834a32ff861b8a1fadc23470928c708a71e4b20764a58a8e4c76fc19ae.png)
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Daoni
The details in the foreground are good. Adding more to the body of the character and adding more detail to the background should help.