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Overkill? by LittleDevil-888

Overkill?

LittleDevil-888

INT. KATE'S HOUSE: LIVING ROOM - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS

KATE slaps both hands over BELL’S mouth.

KATE
Shh!

The sound of clawed feet clicking against the wood floor grows louder. A shadow at the bottom of the door slides past. The shadow steps back and stops in front of the door.

The girls close their eyes and hold their breath anxiously.

SCRATCH! SCRAPE! SCRATCH!

The girls scream as a cacophony of scratching and scraping assaults them.

SCRAPE! SCRAPE! SCRATCH!

Kate and Bell hold each other in pure terror, sobbing and shaking. The sound stops, and the shadow backs away from the door.

Slowly the girls quiet down.

Confused, Kate reaches the door handle. Bell pulls her back down.

BELL
No! What if it's still there!

Before Kate could respond…

Creeek…

The door opens on its own, slowly.

Kate—on her hands and knees—peeks her head out of the closet.

The fire pokes near the fireplace are knocked over. Other than that, the house looks fine… until she looks down. Eyes wide, she gasps.

BELL
What!

KATE
(reading)
N-never hurt her again or I'll be back?

The words "NEVER HURT HER AGAIN OR I'LL BE BACK" lay scratched deep into the wood floor in front of the closet.

Bell crawls out of the closet next to Kate.

BELL
Hurt? W-we didn’t hurt anyone!

SILVEREYES appears in the darkness of the closet behind the girls, teeth bared, pupils so thin they're barely visible.

She BURSTS out of the closet and pins the two girls with her paws.

JACQUELINE (SILVEREYES)
(snarling; hissing)
You know EXACTLY what you did!

The girls scream and squirm between her claws.

BELL
K-Kate kicked her!

KATE
No, I didn’t! Y-you took her leg off!

BELL
Lier!

JACQUELINE (SILVEREYES)
You think you're about to be eaten and all you can do is lie and blame each other? Aren't you supposed to be friends?

SilverEyes leans in, breath hot, fangs glistening. Kate flinches and trembles.

JACQUELINE (SILVEREYES) (CONT’D)
Funny what the threat of death drags out, isn’t it?

Her grip loosens.

A door SLAMS open from upstairs. A man's voice calls out.

???
What is going on out here!?

SilverEyes raises to her feet, ears dropping in disbelief as DAVID MUDWIN comes down the stairs in his PJ’s.

JACQUELINE (SILVEREYES)
You're joking… You? Again!?

The girls scramble away.

Kate pushes Bell over to run upstairs first. Bell recovers and follows.

Upon seeing SilverEyes David pulls a shotgun out from a compartment in the wall behind a hanging picture. SilverEyes stands astonished, one ear higher than the other.

JACQUELINE (SILVEREYES)
Really!? You just have that there? Why would you-

He cocks the gun and takes aim. Her eyes widen and she scrambles down the hall.

BOOM!

BOOM!

She dodges 2 shots and slides into the bathroom, slamming the door shut.

David pauses to reload.


A quick scene from the story I'm writing. Turns out it's not a great idea to bully the little sister of a werewolf. Who knew?

Read the story here---> https://www.deviantart.com/littledevil-888/art/Wolf-Of-Penumbra-S1-Ep1-literature-802918761

Playing with perspective, getting more human practice, working on environments and rendering. Boy this was a beast lol. Took around 12-13 hours-ish. Not exactly sure cuz I did the sketch, left it alone for a couple days and then came back.

Drawing teeth and mouths can be frustrating but when ya get it right it is so SO satisfying! The wulver body is MADE for perspective shots like this, ah drawing feels so good sometimes.

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