holy moly! I finished my first remix! I've never been able to finish a remix before so this is a huge triumph for me.
I've caught the Gravity Falls bug baaaad.
I hope you enjoy c: and feel free to critique and comment like crazy... I'm super new at this!
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Junga
0:40- there is a buildup, but what it's building up to isn't enough. This is usually the part where people refer to as "dropping the bass." It doesn't have to be that big of a drop, but a little more than what you have would be good. Maybe adding some beats may solve this problem?
1:40- there seems to be a skip.
2:15- Thank you for not fading out! I was scared you would.
Overall, I think it needs more bass and percussion. However, I'm not comparing this to the original Theme because I've never heard it. You did good for your first try. Keep working at it. :)