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Meowrails. by BillTheSetite (critique requested)

Meowrails. (critique requested)

BillTheSetite

My palebro adriofthedead is going through a little bit of a rough patch so I doodled this to try and cheer her up. We're both stupid silly homestucks so it's her character as Nepeta and mine as Equius. Whoops. Plenty wrong with this, I know; please feel free to give critique though! I want to learn!

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    D'awww little Bill. :3

    CRITEAKEN TIEM: Lookin' good. I noticed that you're blocking out shapes for the heads a lot more; awesome! You can also do that with bodies; snakes are long, bendy cylinders, so that'll give your snakes more form so they're less ribbon-y. Other than that, I'd say just continue to practice and you'll do great.

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      gah thank you! I will keep that in mind; so when sketching out the shape for the snake body I should do a series of cylinders in "3D" and then just erase the end parts to get it to look right? And I will keep practicing, i promise! <3<3