My palebro is going through a little bit of a rough patch so I doodled this to try and cheer her up. We're both stupid silly homestucks so it's her character as Nepeta and mine as Equius. Whoops. Plenty wrong with this, I know; please feel free to give critique though! I want to learn!
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Morphology
D'awww little Bill. :3
CRITEAKEN TIEM: Lookin' good. I noticed that you're blocking out shapes for the heads a lot more; awesome! You can also do that with bodies; snakes are long, bendy cylinders, so that'll give your snakes more form so they're less ribbon-y. Other than that, I'd say just continue to practice and you'll do great.