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A research team has been dispatched to an unexplored planet to document its flora and fauna, but something lurks in the shadows...
My very first commission! Quite a long piece, but it was great fun to write and I really got my teeth stuck into it. Hope you enjoy!
Commission for rawkus_rocksteady over on FA
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Thank you very much! I do like me a cliffhanger, I have to admit
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Well that was an unsatisfying ending, but then you meant it to be, didn't you...didn't you!
Humor aside it was a very good read, kept me intrigued all the way through. I have to commend you on the gutsy ending as well. Not too often that gets pulled off as well as you did.